ArykaiI give you my heart, My heart is for you. You have my heart, I cannot take it back. You cannot give it back. My heart belongs to you, But you do not want it,Arykai
you do not want my heart. But you cannot give it back My eyes soon see grey, My heart beat slows, it sits in your hand. My Blood runs cold. You still have my heart. It still sits in your hand. You cannot lose it, You cannot forget it.
Disguised AgendaA cynical mind is at work, a monster plotting through the eyes of a man.Disguised Agenda
A cold sweat drips where his game is to begin. The ropes are drenched.
Gagged and bound, squeezing for life - his playmate.
A frantic mind is at work, &nb
Chris no BakaI Want…Chris no Baka
I want to write where you can’t read,
I want to scream where you can’t hear,
I want to reach where you can’t touch,
I want to be where you aren’t near.
I want to see what to you is dark,
I want to know what to you is un-true,
I want to do everything,
You know you just can’t do.
lucky-chickI can smell your scent from a mile away When i touch you, you feel oh-so-tender I long for you every night and all day The taste of you I'll always rememberlucky-chick
To think of you brings sweet thoughts to my mind your simple shape is familiar to me Annother like you i may never find I often hold you in highest esteem
You're allways different, yet always the same It seems that way wherever you are found my heart races at the sound of your name I'll pick you up when you fall on the ground
I know that to others weird this will seem But I do love you, My d
Literary Groups and Clubs.Literary Groups and Clubs
GENERAL LITERATURE GROUPS:
Adopt-a-Writer - http://adopt-a-writer.deviantart.com/ A club built to match up all kinds of writers, whether a creator of prose or poetry, and find someone who will offer critique, help, and friendship! Deviants have the chance to be an adopter and an adoptee, or either, and can even create a family of supporters based on offering friendly critique. Varied projects such as contests and resources are planned for the future. Last update/submission: Jul. 28, 2008 / Jul. 16, 2008
fotoFRIDAY - http://fotofriday.deviantart.com/ fot
SV's Critiqueing GuidelinesA Positive CritiqueSV's Critiqueing Guidelines
To improve the standard of our prose we need to become better writers. By following easily understandable guidelines, received in the form of a Positive Critique, such changes will occur.
A positive critique is one that politely offers the criticised writer a framework by which they can improve. Aggressive or abrasive comments are generally dismissed as simple obnoxiousness, and may even have a negative impact on the writer. A polite and comprehensive critique however, is usually well received.
When critiquing a piece it is not necessary to know metre, literary or poetic terminology,
People should be able to go all on their own... talk to other members etc..
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Suppose we were able to share meanings freely without a compulsive urge to impose our view or conform to those of others and without distortion and self-deception. Would this not constitute a real revolution in culture? -David Bohm
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You'll always be my thunder,
so bring on the rain...
~Boys Like Girls
Clubs: SV [link], p-U-n-K: [link]
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Suppose we were able to share meanings freely without a compulsive urge to impose our view or conform to those of others and without distortion and self-deception. Would this not constitute a real revolution in culture? -David Bohm
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You'll always be my thunder,
so bring on the rain...
~Boys Like Girls
Clubs: SV [link], p-U-n-K: [link]